So I decided to read it, partly because ![[personal profile]](https://www.dreamwidth.org/img/silk/identity/user.png)
flourish said it wasn't that bad. I don't know. I kind of think it's that bad. It's borderline readable Twilight Human AU fic with the serial numbers filed off. Except the characters are (even more) two dimensional and have sex every three seconds. And the sex becomes incredibly trite and predictable. The writing is... not good.
But what really gets my goat? The Edward character (Christian) calls the Bella character (Ana) "baby" all the time. Especially during sex. It skeeves me to a great degree.
The sex is OK. TBH it's a little boring. I think the people who are gobbling it up and gushing over it have never read fanfic, or possibly any erotica at all. So.
My single biggest problem? The characters have zero chemistry. I felt like Bella/Edward had that much going for them.
flourish said it wasn't that bad. I don't know. I kind of think it's that bad. It's borderline readable Twilight Human AU fic with the serial numbers filed off. Except the characters are (even more) two dimensional and have sex every three seconds. And the sex becomes incredibly trite and predictable. The writing is... not good. But what really gets my goat? The Edward character (Christian) calls the Bella character (Ana) "baby" all the time. Especially during sex. It skeeves me to a great degree.
The sex is OK. TBH it's a little boring. I think the people who are gobbling it up and gushing over it have never read fanfic, or possibly any erotica at all. So.
My single biggest problem? The characters have zero chemistry. I felt like Bella/Edward had that much going for them.