posted by [identity profile] imaginarycircus.livejournal.com at 11:07pm on 23/08/2008
No it is back to being fun to read although it needs some editing. It seriously drags in places. But I'm enjoying it. :D

Though every time he says Bella's eyes are deep pools of melted chocolate I crack up.
 
posted by [identity profile] jacyevans.livejournal.com at 11:43pm on 23/08/2008
Oh, it definitely needs editing, there's no doubt about that.

LOL - ohgod, that and there should be a drinking game. Every time he says the word "chagrin," you take a shot XD
 
posted by [identity profile] imaginarycircus.livejournal.com at 12:48am on 24/08/2008
I was reading aloud to David and started leaving blank spaces for him to fill in the obvious answers. He said Bella's eyes were like deep pools of melted chocolate with raisins and jimmies and I almost died.
 
posted by [identity profile] jacyevans.livejournal.com at 12:57am on 24/08/2008
LMAOOOO. Ohgod. Best description of Bella EVER.
 
posted by [identity profile] imaginarycircus.livejournal.com at 01:09am on 24/08/2008
We were having ice cream at the time too. And I asked him what my eyes would be like in overwrought romance speak and he said marble and I was confused and then realized he meant granite and was even more confused.

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